MisaAmane

ahh, more chapters, more reviews I'm trying to continue reading but I only get to quick read (due to a time limit, and the fact that it's extremely late at ...

I didn't notice any errors in grammar or spelling, although if there were any in there, I probably wouldn't have noticed them anyways it has a small amount of writing ...

that was extremely well done, although to those who aren't very deep, they may not understand it which is why a person has said "I don't like it" because she ...

best I've seen so far! :D I don't think I have much to suggest, and I'm sorry for that though I think it wise to use some comma's maybe? if ...

this was amazing and touching. I think that you should continue to write these kinds of things. although it was very sad in a way, I think it is pretty ...