Mir0l

Hi! First of all, I wanted to say that you have a really interesting story so far. I think your story flows well. I was compelled to read to the ...

Beautiful. It really highlights how something or someone may seem great, happy, and perfect, but that on the inside it may be sad and imperfect. How you crave happiness, but ...

You have a creative and fun concept, you can expand on it in many ways! I like the dynamic between the main duo too. Something I'd personally add is a ...