MillarS

There's a reason it's part 1, I'm still working on another part, but thanks for the advice, it's certainly helped a lot. In my 2nd part I'm hoping to reveal ...

I still need more points to add the second part which kind of unravels some stuff. But there is some stuff I could change. Thanks! ~M.S

wow, ok, will try to fix it. sorry for my mistakes! guess i never set it right...

Thanks, I just couldn't think of anything that was linked to what I was thinking and how I wanted to picture it, so cotton was repeated! I tried my best, ...

Did I loose the point for the spelling error? lol :) Thanks a lot for the review, I do have more of it written, I just wanted to see the ...

Thanks a tonne!!! I will re-write some of it.