Milky

Wow, this was very poignant. I'm not as young as most of you guys, I'm 20, and I've had a good amount of life experiences. What you wrote was touching, ...

I liked this short. I thought the premise was well fleshed out, and the details you brought to the audience were excellent. I have to say though, those doctors are ...

I like the idea that you had for this short, but there a couple of critiques I have for you. Your story is very rushed, which is the opposite of ...

Wow, very interesting. To me, it's what you left out, or rather implied, that is the most interesting part of this piece. I'm curious as to know what kind of ...