Midnightrose4

Thank you!

Thank you so much! I'm very glad you liked it. It took a lot for me to actually post this since it is one that came straight from my heart. ...

Thank you for the opinions and what not, but this isn't meant to be an angry poem, its meant to give off more of a sad vibe (Probably didn't do ...

Thank you, it does help :)

Thank you for your suggestions. I'll be using those for my next poem piece :)

Thank you :)

Thanks so much! :)

Thank you, I will fix the grammar mistakes. Like I said, this is something I came up with in a few minutes. I haven't written poetry in a while, so ...

Thank you, I wasn't sure really how the child-like voice came in, I wasn't really aware it was there until you pointed it out and I had another look at ...

Thank you! I just wrote this up in about 15 or 20 minutes, since the idea came to my head, I had it all written in a notebook before typing. ...