MidnightVampire

I loved it. there arn't many words (at least not that I can think of now) that describe this (unless I pull out a thesaurus). That song would sound great, ...

Nice twist. I got a little creeped out about the heart thing, but maybe that's because I'm very visual. I sorta got the image, which -in my case- is bad, ...

Wow! that rocked. Please continue. I love the diary entrance, about 'while me and my knife decide that you're going to die and see who's will is stronger'. *chills* pm ...

I liked this. I am really really not very good at giveing reviews for poems... Its kinda like free verse lyrical poems. I loved it, had meaning.

I didn't think I would like this, but I really do. I got a little confuzed, what is vassis's realtion to mathias? I liked the dialoge, very good.

Hey, I really love this, can you pm me when you put the next chapter in? I like the name, by the way.

Ok, a)I'm in seventh grade! Not 4th! I was in fourth grade when I was 8 or 9. and b)It didn't help much, just made me feel as if I ...

Please please critique it. I really want to know if this begining is better.

Wow, I really really liked this. This would be my type of story. I don't have any questions, seeminglymeaningless got it all. Nice begining. I like the "come out" line. ...

No errors spotted. Nope, none. Good job!

I'm finally editing it! I'll fix the cake thing late ( I rewrote that part, but I don't have it with me). I might mix a few suggestions (I'm trying ...

Ok, I agree on all of the above ( I'm like that, sadly).Hillarious!

I just realized my quote didn't work. The sentence was " Maybe I should get some clothes on before breakfast" Sorry If I confuzed anyone.

Yeah, about being harsh.Sometimes people have to be like that, it gets the word through. About the whole 'me myself and I' quip that you think is lame, it's there ...

I'm an idiot. Where i said, the thing about 'must notice something about being a vampire' I ddin't see your point. Sooorrry!! *looks down at feet glumly*