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The shackles appeared on her wrists and ankles and my heart broke into The bolded word should be switched with "in two" Throughout the story you seem to switch from ...

Well first off.... Lars is an ass >:( “And is it under the White Swans’ suggestion that everything is white?” She caught the tone in his voice and glared at ...

Immediately, more women came down, each of them carrying knives with their hair even rattier and their clothes even more disheveled. Also, I'm horrible with semicolons, so I might be ...

Yesss! I love this whole "fast update" thing! :3 I gotst excited. You made my day. Nothing like reading a new chapter after finishing an English final ;P Hmm... There ...

Waaa! I loved it! As always ;P Nitpicks: “Sorry, Iluve,” Alzan said cheerfully. Lomones felt Alzan grab his shoulder and drag him up to his feet. “You should go to ...

Hi! :D You checked out my entry, so I thought I'd check out yours! I like it, but it makes my confidence lower! XD Just a few nitpicks, like any ...

Heyyyy Dai :3 I really liked this story. Although, like every story, there were a few nitpicks. "What a shame - she's got a pretty cute face, too." One kicked ...

*sniffle* I... I so totally did NOT cry. No way T^T I'm not crying. *sniff* I just... my contact itches, that's all!! OKAY I LIED, I'M CRYING!!! T^T Oh boy. ...

Captain John Seaman gazed contently out of the small window in the ship’s cabin. He kept his hands firm on the steering wheel, which controlled his small ship ,

Oh gosh... Oh wow that was totally confusing. Soo... Solea is a Conqueror? Since when? And how? And... and... and does that mean that, when the villagers where burning down ...

Oy vey >.< this took longer than it should have to read. My sister has one of those distracting voices that you can't ignore, even if she's not talking to ...

Oh wow. I totally agree. One hundred percent. I actually disagree about the comments on the swearing. I don't think you have to edit it out or fix it in ...

Oh my gosh I loved it >.< I had absolutely no idea what was going on but I loved it anyway :3 Since I've never read this kind of style ...

Okay, first of all, I totally loved this. It flowed wonderfully and it was such a beautiful rhythm that it almost felt like a poem. I think that your use ...

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