Micah

Okay-fine by me!

Cool, because I've done it!! ;)

Totally...Part four coming soon...;)

Oh my gosh, did your Mum die? I'm so sorry! You really are my best critic then, because you know how Tom should feel, plus you've been throught the fazes ...

Thanks, I've just finished now. Here you go!

Thanks Nox. you've been the most helpful reviewer i've met on this site! ;) Now it's up to me to make the changes... Anyway, I'm halfway through the third part, ...

okay-done it!

Interesting. Did you use the bible for research? Just curious...

Hey thanks Noxious, that was really helpful. ;) guess what? The next part, ironically, does include descriptions, and is mainly about Tom's thoughts. I've already written it, plus the start ...

lol.

Thats how I wanted it to be though.

Preddy good! The only thing I can offer is this: Try and keep rhyming systimatic in a poem thats mainly a rhyme. Because some parts rhymed perfectly, and others didn't ...

Thank you for stating that. Anyway. I've edited the story a again, and used some of the advice you guys gave, so here it is.

I don't think ryan said anything half as offensive as slytherinseeker did. But hey. Thanks you guys.

Sounds good! Do you mean it's gonna be like 'teen saves world' type of thingy? Cuz if so, those stories are always popular! ;)