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CuriouVampire wrote :For some reason I'm always here second... anyways I'm here to review . Seriously, I think you've reserved yourself the second position P.S.: I'll let you know first ...

Thanks a lot to all.

Man, there has to be other style to show that the grammar is poor. And what do you emna by my grammar?

Thanks a lot Skins> I would work on the points.

Is it a new story?

RK the MC is not she. He is he. :lol:

Thanks a lot Embee. i would love to do the research.

Hi I just saw the video. Its nice. But there's one thing i would like to add. Can you add lyrics too as the sound is not that much clear. ...

Thanks a lot dear. @skins: You helped a lot with this piece. :D And I am glad so many great writers liked it and you think it is supposed to ...

Telling: She slammed the door shut.She was tired. Showing: The door slammed with a thud as she entered the room. She headed straight for the recliner, stretching her legs and ...

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Hey Biffle. I am also one of the editors.

Tahnsk a lot dear.

Thanks RK.

Thanks a lot Isha.