MiaParamore

Excuse me to both of you, I have a right to voice my views and she has that much sense to understand what is right. So please don't comment and ...

I am splitting it into two. I have been working on that for two days. Maybe I will post the new, fresh chapter-1 tomorrow.

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It's looking too big to read at one go. Split it into paras..

@KAt:You opt for other colour like red or something or grammar. Blue and Purple are getting a bit confusing.

Is this teh continuation of Mia"Bruised and Beaten. if yes then let the title be same. i thought it's another story until I saw the name Mia...

Thannks peanut.

As many have said before I don't think there's anything wrong with my grammar. And also I am not going fast. i have thought a lot about it and then ...

Thanks. Will definitely go through it.

Thanks Valentine. But I think that people do co-relate their real life relationships in their dream. This dream was just a way to bring out her feelings and fears to ...

It's wonderfully rhymed. I am too from New Delhi. Keep writing. Do you write stories also?

Nice idea.

Thanks cuco for acknowledging me coz these days people don't. I will review your work more carefully next time. So write quickly.!!!!!

Thanks for reviewing my work and I will work on the characters. @demeter: The dialogue sounds a bit stiff in many places. When putting words into your characters' mouths, think ...

Nice one. Is Susan his foster mother?