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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Mr. Johns (Part One)

    Hey Jasmine. Here as promised. :) quote]The chair was cold and hard, lines of dried scarlet blood staining the metal legs.[/quote]This was a very intense beginning and it really made ...

    Aug 15, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Shipwreck Isle ch. 1{Edit}

    Hey Stells. Thanks for the request again, and I am happy you worked on the chapter one again, unlike others who just start working on other chapters. The very first ...

    Aug 14, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Taboo [3]

    Hey Pink. This review might be short, as I don't have much to say. Olivia and Hunter grinned as they connected our desks into a classic triangle shape. This was ...

    Aug 12, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Shipwreck Isle ch. 1

    Hey Stels. Sorry it took me soooooo long, but as I told you, I had a test to study for. Anyways, congratulations this is featured. I hope that I prove ...

    Aug 11, 2010
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: I'd Cry (An "I'd Lie" by Taylor Swift Parody) *contest entry

    Hey Ultra. Amazing, I must say. I had not listen to the song, or even heard of it before this parody, and I really like the way you transformed this ...

    Aug 10, 2010
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Where The Music Is

    Hey KAH! Can I give you some sweet nickname? Huh? :wink: Anyways, here to review on request. :) Although you do have very good reviews already, but I would try ...

    Aug 8, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Taboo [2]

    Hey Pink. It's Shubhi again to review your work, and this time I hope the review is much more helpful, than the hopeless one I gave the last time. With ...

    Aug 7, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Protector:Chapter One

    Hey Liger . You didn't tell me that you have posted this. Never mind, I came on my own. I quietly put up my cloak, feeling the soft cloth. You ...

    Aug 6, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: A shot of Arrogance (Chapter Five)

    Hey Skins . Sorry it took me so much time. But as I told you, I had been selfish yesterday. I started writing my novel yesterday, instead of doing your ...

    Aug 6, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Taboo [1]

    Hey Pink. I had done a long review, but deleted it. So I would write whatever I can remember, okay? I would make up to it in the next chapter. ...

    Aug 5, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: New story I'm trying. Sorry, if it's not epic :p ~PBIS 0.1~

    Hey Jasmine. Here to review on PM request. :D Well, first of all I think that you are having trouble naming this piece, right? Give it any title except for ...

    Aug 5, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Let Me Love You(18)

    Hey Tiffany. So, finally you have come up with another chapter, and it is good to see that at least someone here is contiuning with their novel and not leaving ...

    Aug 5, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Let Me Love You(17)

    Hey Tiffany. Here to review, again. :D Maybe it’s not that bad, maybe… This gets a bit of weird here. Do you mean the contractions aren't that bad? But I ...

    Aug 2, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Dark Secrets [Chapter Two]

    Hey Raven. Shubhi here again. I did have something to review, but I wanted to review this first as I was very intrigued by this story. And I think I ...

    Aug 1, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Dark Secrets [Prologue + Chapter 1]

    Hey Raven! :) Shubhi here to review. The moment I read the title I knew I had to read this and review it. And then to add to my excitement ...

    Jul 31, 2010


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