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Hey Lindsey! Another one of my age! Yay! My first critique would be of the presentation. I know it won't be published exactly as it looks here, but when you ...

Hey Angerrr! Sorry I took long, but I am here. :D This review might be harsh, sorry. I am not sure how this is going to turn out but it ...

Hey there, Tim! Thanks for the request, but this was one long piece I have seen in ages. It's not too lengthy keeping in mind if it gets published, but ...

Hey Ava, me here again. I am so sorry for the hopeless review last time. But I'll try making up for it. I was a mile away from the village, ...

Hey Ava. Thanks for the request, and I am here. Hope I'll be of some help, though I doubt it since Skinsy has already spread her magic. D: Prologue: The ...

Hey Ems, here again. Hope I can be of some help again. Saint Josephine's School of Acting For Young Women. Ellie's Diary! Sunday. 6th December. I have a problem here ...

Hey Ems. Sorry I got here a bit late, but I'd try to be of help. The first line? I think it was perfect. Not starting with some description, and ...

Hey there. Thanks for the request, first. The beginning? I think it was kinda boring. Sorry. I mean the first line was a hooker, no doubt about it, but what ...

Hey there, Skins. I just reloaded the review I had done-it always happens with your reviews. Anyways, I didn't bother nit-picking them again. Lee’s friends began egging him on, calling ...

Hey Stella, welcome back! It'd be an honor reviewing you. Fluffy, creamy marshmallows dipped halfway in the unicorn cup full of hot cocoa just waiting to be devoured. Okay, so ...

Hey Leth! She shook her head, knowing it would do any good thinking about what might’ve been. Any good? Did you mean 'no good'? Also the part 'what might've been' ...

Hey Point! :) TV’s were blaring from abandoned homes, talking about the bombing in West Virginia. As we walked along the smoking streets, hand in hand Okay, didn't you need ...

Hey WW. I really liked the picture you made for your novel-it was elegant and simple. Just what I like. My social worker, Mr. Wheeler, drove , You don't need ...

Hey, I am back again! :) First of all, before commenting on the story, I'd like to add that you should post your story in the 'Story' format we have ...

Hey Leth!Sorry for the late-ness but I am here. Staring back at her was a pale young man with close cropped brown hair and ocean blue eyes. They weren’t to ...