MexicanDefender

It's not much on the rhyming side but I could hear it in a heavier suit, the first four lines didn't flow in my head that well but maybe that's ...

Thank you :D well the dog becomes his companion and the dog's real purpose is not made clear but towards the end it's sorta a shocker.

I like the morbidity. It's not overly done so it's good. I liked the bit of internal struggle in the verses, you should expand on it. thank you, I was ...

I could see someone playing this in a little concert house. it would get me dancin' lol it was good. keep it coming your lyrics look promising.

hehe thank you well it is a dark song yes it is metal. I didn't particularly have emotions toward it at first it was just something to write. very dark ...

That was really good. I like the rhyming in the beginning and mid sections the most. It is excellent work =]