Metalmauzen

Hey there, After some time of absence I've been writing again and now I'm looking for stories similar to mine. The first story I read is the exact thing I ...

you just gained a fan. I remembered your mermaid-story and I'm checking some more out now. I don't know if I am going to review them all. Maybe a couple, ...

I really, really like how you describe the I-person in this poem However there is a lot of pace-shifting. It could be intentional though. The lines in the first verse ...

Hello there, The last time I did a review was a long, long time ago and even then I didn't write much reviews, but here goes. First things first. The ...

Of course I don't have the music that goes with it, but I have to say I'm not quite touched by your lyrics here. I like the verses. Good vocabulary ...

Well, goal achieved! This is good stuff, and if possible can you send me an mp3 or some sort of video or something when everything is put together? I love ...

This was...really, really good. I first had my doubts to even start reading this, becuase it's fairly long and... well, it's a romantic story. Glad that I did though. Tops: ...

really nice suspense in this story, but what I like even more are the dialouges. They seemed very natural, how they acted and reacted at each other. Kudo's for that. ...

It's indeed interesting and short. I'm a little amazed how you could fit in so much character, drama and other information in so little space. (that is a compliment) I'm ...

Although I don't know exactly what you're talking about in your first spoiler, I did like this poem. It has this authentic sadness. I can't help but sympathize this angel. ...

good read! very well written. I have to confess that I'm not a fan of vampire-love stories, but this one did exactly what it was meant to do. Draw the ...

hmm, you have a story here. I liked that it was fast, but I'm not sure if that's intentional or just poor grammar. I'm assuming this main character is a ...

I think this is a most sincere piece of text. I can tell you wrote this from your heart. I once wrote something very much like this too, and like ...