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Thanks a bunch DarkKnight9. This is a rough draft and I'm gonna get to editing it sometime today.

Thanks for pointing those things out. I already noticed that the part with the floating cloud doesn't sound very good. I'll get on those other typos as well. thanks for ...

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So I actually added some more stanzas. :) I felt like it would maybe help. It completes the story of the sun's journey. Anyway, I'll get to it some more ...

Welcome for the reviews I gave you, thanks for returning the favor. I'm going to go to the editing part tomorrow, so if you come back it should be edited.

Thanks. This is a rough draft. I hadn't really read over it yet.

Alright, thanks for the review. The part of recalling is the next lines; the beauty of it all. When I say won, I want it to refer to the previous ...

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I love this. conversations in a writers head, or between other characters are always interesting. This one it so true. I feel like I want to write to teach things ...

Sorry about the double comment, I meant to put it as a review.

This is great. After a moment, my fingers begin moving, frantically at first, as if there is a race against time and I have no choice but to continue, to ...