Messenger

Glad to hear such a happy reviewer. I will get on the dialogue soon. And the daughter/father relationship will play a part. And the daughter/mother/son relationship as well. The sword ...

OK, so chapter 4 is up. I'd like if you could tell me what you think.

You are welcome.

Man alive! I just looked at my review. I don't think anyone would sit to read THAT, it is so long.

Love it!

I understand. Who DOES want to change their writing? And I think it is not that big of a deal.

That would be Phoebe.

Pressuring Pheobe.

I will get on my editor about hurrying up his job. I want to gt some more up as well.

Thanks! I will look into the Burns name.

Thanks fr the review. I've worked on this chapter a couple times, and I like it the way it is. If you think there is something that needs more description, ...

Of course I must.

Oh! Wow that makes tons of sense now.

I never stop being amazing. :)

Hey, just here to say I hope to see chapter 3 sometime soon. No rush though, just a reminder.