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Knight Malachi here to review. Knight Dragon got all the technical errors; onto the poem itself. It was very nicely written; a somewhat calm and slow-paced has a somewhat sad, ...

Been busy so I haven't gotten to replying to your reviews until now. OK, some of the punctuation might be commas called style commas, and I would talk to Michael ...

OK, I would have to disagree that capitalizing I is not necessary. It is a basic rule in grammar that you always capitalize names. I understand about the cast away, ...

No. :)

You'll see next chapter.

Glad to hear such a happy reviewer. I will get on the dialogue soon. And the daughter/father relationship will play a part. And the daughter/mother/son relationship as well. The sword ...

OK, so chapter 4 is up. I'd like if you could tell me what you think.

You are welcome.

Man alive! I just looked at my review. I don't think anyone would sit to read THAT, it is so long.

Love it!

I understand. Who DOES want to change their writing? And I think it is not that big of a deal.

That would be Phoebe.

Pressuring Pheobe.

I will get on my editor about hurrying up his job. I want to gt some more up as well.

Thanks! I will look into the Burns name.