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Thanks a lot. i will be working on the errors in a few days.

thanks a lot Cailey. let me get right to your noted problems. i'll have to find the typos, but as to the thoughts they were italicized when I wrote it ...

Thank you. I will get those spots as soon as possible. Please keep reading.

Because it was a review. A review does not have to include pointing out errors.

I do usually make my reviews longer, but I have already read this on a different website, and didn't feel like saying much.

Sorry, meant to mark this as a review. Oops.

Oh, that was House of Whispers, my bad.

OK, so Sons of Courage was made out of wanting to write a sword-fight scene on a frozen pond. Next thing I know it's three hours later and I have ...

It seems like sometimes the best writing comes out of random inspiration.

Hey, you got it in the featured!

Knight Malachi here to review. Knight Dragon got all the technical errors; onto the poem itself. It was very nicely written; a somewhat calm and slow-paced has a somewhat sad, ...

Been busy so I haven't gotten to replying to your reviews until now. OK, some of the punctuation might be commas called style commas, and I would talk to Michael ...

OK, I would have to disagree that capitalizing I is not necessary. It is a basic rule in grammar that you always capitalize names. I understand about the cast away, ...

No. :)

You'll see next chapter.