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Re: The Book Man, Chapters 15-16 (Revised)
no I did one for EACH chapter silly
Mar 31, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapter 11 (Revised)
Pssh like you'll beat me. You know how I get when I'm on a roll :P
Mar 31, 2014 -
Re: Mr.Fellows
funny beginning Iggy XD
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Title
why is it that you make the lines like that? I've never seen it done
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Castor's Tale - The Prologue
Well this is very happy review. Glad you liked those parts, they were both something I tried to work on specifically.
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Castor's Tale - The Prologue
Thank you for the review. I have an idea of a better introduction and I'll add it soon! I'll also hop on those nitpicks and such quickly. I think if ...
Mar 28, 2014 -
Re: Castor's Tale - The Prologue
Yeah... I nearly cried
Mar 28, 2014 -
Re: Shadowdale - Chapter 1
oh right those little thingys.
Mar 28, 2014 -
Re: Shadowdale - Chapter 1
Your fiance wouldn't be distracting any would he? :P
Mar 28, 2014 -
Re: Castor's Tale - The Prologue
Why thank you Aurora (your real named:) Glad to hear I made the characters believeable and showed Castor's strong side so clearly as well as got ya hooked :P I ...
Mar 28, 2014 -
Re: Castor's Tale - The Prologue
Thank you Sage Deanie! I'll get them typos and commas soon enough. Also I'll try to add a little bit about the forest and include some more detail as to ...
Mar 28, 2014 -
Re: Shadowdale - Chapter 1
the next chapter :P
Mar 28, 2014 -
Re: Castor's Tale - The Prologue
I'll get on the mother/father thing right away!
Mar 28, 2014 -
Re: Shadowdale - Chapter 1
something didn't happen here
Mar 28, 2014 -
Re: Prakfura Raiders: Chapter One: Bad Luck Outlaw: Part One {Redacted}
good job getting a chapter up. I can't settle on a beginning for mine, even though I have almost the whole story outlined.
Mar 25, 2014