Messenger

Thank you for the review. I have an idea of a better introduction and I'll add it soon! I'll also hop on those nitpicks and such quickly. I think if ...

Yeah... I nearly cried

oh right those little thingys.

Your fiance wouldn't be distracting any would he? :P

Why thank you Aurora (your real named:) Glad to hear I made the characters believeable and showed Castor's strong side so clearly as well as got ya hooked :P I ...

Thank you Sage Deanie! I'll get them typos and commas soon enough. Also I'll try to add a little bit about the forest and include some more detail as to ...

the next chapter :P

I'll get on the mother/father thing right away!

something didn't happen here

good job getting a chapter up. I can't settle on a beginning for mine, even though I have almost the whole story outlined.

You got featured? So good! This was so nice and true. It had heart behind it Sushi! That girl wearing the strange clothes, she prefers comfort over appearance Dat's me ...

this should NOT be sent to all reviewers. Sorry that was kind of an outburst. If you wish to hear my reasons chat me up some time! ~Messenger

did my comment not post? Aw shoot. Please don;t go Monsters. I've come to realize that reviewers like you though harsh can be a great help in a writers life. ...

That's a very well-written and neutral post Monsters :)

fantastic!