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mm yeah, didn't think of that. :)

Yeah I was thinking doing it in this order, Chpt 1 pt 1-2, chpt 3 pt 1 and 2, chpt 2 part 1-2, or switch it to: Chpt 1 pt ...

ah well if he made mistakes dats my fault.

i thought it was fast. Once this challenge is over I may come back and slow this down. Actually, I'm thinking I'll be switching the location of the chapters as ...

What they mean is, you are faithful in reviewing my chapters when they come out, rather then waiting.

Hi Wolfie, thanks for the review! I did some editing before posting, so that's probably why it was better. u had to laugh when you stated the sentence about the ...

hahahahahaha You make me laugh lost. That is a brilliantly snarky way of reviewing! ;) This is long, and I am planning on possibly scrapping it. But thanks for the ...

We will go back. Sssh *Pats head* Sorry for the typos. Maybe I should read my stuff before posting . . . naaah :P This chapter was a little slow ...

sorry, I think that came out a little more forcefully then I intended. That last line just kind of irked me. I didn't realize it sounded so harsh, I didn't ...

i understand about the short, small, large, words, but the "short man" is merely a technique. I've seen lots of writers do it when they don't give a character's name ...

Wow thank you! This is very helpful for the technical side of editing stuff. It doesn't surprise me that there were this many mistakes. I had to write it in ...

Wow Rosey. Just when I think I've learned something, you come and BLOOOOOOOOOW my mind away! You have no idea how helpful that was, and I didn't even write this ...

you should give it a like then!

my goodness O.o *Rushes to edit* stop reviewing me! Review them :P

thank you! I'll hop on juicing those fights up! And adding Susie's features as well. I thought adding the bit to the card game would just add a little bit ...