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OK. I shall attempt to. I'm changing Miles so that he talks to himself more then just thinks things, in an attempt to make him more distinct. I think it ...

Miles could run for miles? Geddit? :P It amused me when I wrote it :P Why thank you for those. I think sometimes why I missed words is because I ...

haha ok ok that makes sense. A little more on Miles feelings versus thoughts?

not mean :P Do you have any suggestions. I wasn't planning on really "building up on his injuries" it was more focused on Miles and the other characters.

Hey Buggie, sorry, this was during those word wars. I'll try to edit typos from now on before posting. Now as for Kalan, this is only part one of the ...

mm yeah, didn't think of that. :)

Yeah I was thinking doing it in this order, Chpt 1 pt 1-2, chpt 3 pt 1 and 2, chpt 2 part 1-2, or switch it to: Chpt 1 pt ...

ah well if he made mistakes dats my fault.

i thought it was fast. Once this challenge is over I may come back and slow this down. Actually, I'm thinking I'll be switching the location of the chapters as ...

What they mean is, you are faithful in reviewing my chapters when they come out, rather then waiting.

Hi Wolfie, thanks for the review! I did some editing before posting, so that's probably why it was better. u had to laugh when you stated the sentence about the ...

hahahahahaha You make me laugh lost. That is a brilliantly snarky way of reviewing! ;) This is long, and I am planning on possibly scrapping it. But thanks for the ...

We will go back. Sssh *Pats head* Sorry for the typos. Maybe I should read my stuff before posting . . . naaah :P This chapter was a little slow ...

sorry, I think that came out a little more forcefully then I intended. That last line just kind of irked me. I didn't realize it sounded so harsh, I didn't ...

i understand about the short, small, large, words, but the "short man" is merely a technique. I've seen lots of writers do it when they don't give a character's name ...