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It feels awkward, eh. As in HOW I wrote it, or WHAT I wrote? Indented?

Haha i am laughing at some of this. The part about arriving at the doctor's house, was because a previous reviewer thought that part to be confusing. But I can ...

indeed i do!

Is that like my new nickname? :)

OK, lemme first reply to your opening "typos" The His, was completely unintentional, LOL It is acceptable to use exclamation points in place of question marks, I am pretty sure. ...

Thanks Aurora! I didn't go into a ton of detail of Kalan, but I assure you his whole body is in shambles right now :P ?If you read the other ...

you may be back sooner. I'm on a roll :P Glad I caught most of the typos! I will never win the battle against commas. But! I will definitely try ...

no, haha. It took 4 word wars.

you write as much as you can in 15 minutes!

yes, this was done in wordwars, so it was written very fast. I'm going to thoroughly go through part 2!

OK. I shall attempt to. I'm changing Miles so that he talks to himself more then just thinks things, in an attempt to make him more distinct. I think it ...

Miles could run for miles? Geddit? :P It amused me when I wrote it :P Why thank you for those. I think sometimes why I missed words is because I ...

haha ok ok that makes sense. A little more on Miles feelings versus thoughts?

not mean :P Do you have any suggestions. I wasn't planning on really "building up on his injuries" it was more focused on Miles and the other characters.

Hey Buggie, sorry, this was during those word wars. I'll try to edit typos from now on before posting. Now as for Kalan, this is only part one of the ...