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I'm not nearly as active as I used to be! :( So I didn't realize that you had written all these reviews which I will be reading now :)

i never got a notification for this review but thank you so much! You really found a blindspot I had with the fact that Devlin doesn't know those facts about ...

I just reread this chapter and i gotta say, except for the ending, I love this chapter so much

and yeh she freaked out a lil bit

hey, better late than never right? Thanks so much for those pointers, this is why you are the best :) He does not have wings xD I meant like under ...

Hey So i used papay in the way you would dad mom father etc. So when he is being called it's Papay but when talking him as in his familial ...

Oh yeah. So you have tons of room to work with in the future if you wanted to revise and still keep it short.

haha good points made all around. As always :D

I think you should delete it %uD83D%uDE02

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Royal Ranger was awesome. At the time it seemed like it would be the last RA book and I thought it was so fitting. Not everything was perfect, but everyone ...

You've read Brotherband!?!? What about Rangers Apprentice? I owned all of them for a while but he keeps writing. I plan on doing a few short stories like this set ...

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THanks! You can check out my progressing novel set in the same world right here

Hey, this is really meant to be just a short story for now, BUT! Here is the link to the novel set in this universe if you would like to ...