Merry_Haven

CastlesInTheSky - Hey, thanks! For the review, of course. I just edited this chapter, so it makes more sense. Don't worry, I'm definitely gonna keep on going with this. Night ...

Bickazer - Thank you so much for reviewing again! I'll definitely have to take those pointers and use them. This takes place in the early 1800s. I'm going to make ...

Bickazer - I took your pointers into consideration and edited the best I could do. So thank you for all your criticism, it helped a lot. Ashley - Thanks for ...

Night Mistress - I am so sorry. :cry: I had posted this last night and forgot to pm everyone. 'Cause I was so tired and sleepy. I will definitely pm ...

jasmine - This was quite a while ago when I wrote this. I know. I really suck at the commas after the name thing. It drives me crazy when I ...

jasmine12 - Seriously, why do your reviews always make me crack up? *cracks up laughing* Don't worry I'll post the next part up when I finish it and when I'm ...

jasmine12 - When I get the chance I'll fix it. {before school comes :evil: } and, of course I'll take your pointers and everyone else's and use it. Again, thanks! ...

jasmine12 - haha! You're review totally made me laugh! I'll work on the conversations between Sophia and Issac. When I finally get the chance today. :? Otherwise, thanks again. -Merry

Bickazer - Thanks for the helpful review. When I get the chance today, I'll revise it. And no, this wasn't a inconvenience for me. I need all the help I ...

jasmine12 - I've read books with the characters saying their names, in each sentence. But those were the classics. No, I'm not going to ignore your comments. Your comments help ...

jasmine12 - Okay, thanks for the James' thing. I had no idea I was telling and not showing. I'll definitely change that, when I get the chance. Don't worry, I ...

jasmine12 - I didn't know that for the outfit. I'll have to change that for the story. So thanks for info. But this is the 18th hundreds. Otherwise, thanks for ...

girlwithquestions - Thanks for reading. It means a lot to me. For the format, I'll work on it when I get the chance. Otherwise, thanks for checking it out. -Merry

Night Mistress- I am so sorry if this is being confusing for you. I'll try not to rush it and yes, it'll become more clearer as it progresses. Thank You ...

Ashley- Thanks! I'm actually writing the fourth chapter right now. {plus listening to DJ Tiesto!} The whole James thing you'll have to see when the next chapters come up... :P ...