Merry_Haven

Ashley- Whoa. That was an amazing part two. Are you planing to write more? I don't wanna sound greedy, but it was that good and I like to read more. ...

Mal- The first part, sounds like the person is a loner and doesn't like to be bothered. Oh, and definitely not a girly girl. Like... -I hate red roses and ...

Lucyy- First off...his name's Jared. Hehe. Like 30 seconds to Mars Jared...Leto. Anyway, let me start. you know that I don't do what you do when reviewing. I do my ...

Ashley- First of all, Lana has AIDS?! But how? Okay, I have to ask...what time period is this? It seems like it's in the '50s. But that's just me. I ...

The note in the beginning was so romantic. I just loved it. I thought this chapter went a little to fast. Shouldn't Lucas tell Comfort what he was later in ...

Whoa. I gotta read more to this. There's nothing much I can say besides there were a few times where you forgot periods. Other words...AMAZING!!! I thought the light bulb ...

Summer- I'm gonna call you that 'cause I don't know your name. :lol: Anyway, I read this and it seemed a little to fast for me. The characters seemed to ...

Alarainya- I thought this piece was really great! Is there going to be more knowing that this is the prolouge. I have to she dying or maybe sleeping? Names would ...

Lucyy- It is short, as I noticed and it's brief also. Names could help but it's just the prologue. The phrases to describes the man was great and description could ...

Whoa. That was long, but I enjoyed it. :wink: Okay, for me...Ollie seems like a girls name. Yet it makes this story different for a boy's name. Which is a ...

Titch123- Okay, here I go with the reviews. :D First of all the beginning on the "present" scenario was great. You might wanna add a little more in also. It ...

One word. Breathless. That's how I felt when I read this entire story. I was breathless in the beginning and still am. Thanks Ashley. For letting me feel that way ...

Ashley, why do you write stories{that I've read}, that make me think and somehow makes me cry? This "A Whisper in the Wind" story makes me want to cry. I ...

Wow. I feel like crying. *sobbing*. Did Adam die of a car accident? Like a hit-and-run? Because I couldn't figure it out when I read this part. Otherwise, I'll just ...

Boys Like Girls? Such a great band. Makes me wanna go listen to that song... Anyway this was short but I guess it's because it's a short story. The story ...