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Re: Chapter 3: Zai
It's Reviewing time! O_O X_X ^_^ First, amazing story writing, I LOVED how you described the place, at first I was a little lost because( for some reason) I thought ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: Flawless: Chapter 2
Alright, now for the review. I do not know where you were planning to go with the story but i see the ending too abrupt, the story ends at no ...
Feb 23, 2014