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Hey! Well, this was wonderfully written! Overall, I liked it very much, although I still don't know much of what's going on. It's just the first chapter. I think I ...

Wow! This is a really moving piece. I really liked it. You gave your main character a really good voice. I actually felt I could understand him. You had a ...

Hi! First of all, I want to say I really enjoyed this. The way it was written made me feel like I knew the characters, and it made me feel ...

Hey there! First of all, I liked this story very much! It was really impressive. Here are a few things you might consider, though. “Not at Jeremiad’s School for Distinguished ...

This really stunned me! Seriously, near the end I said "Oh my God" out loud. But that's a good thing. The story was awesome. I've seen some spelling mistakes though, ...