MeherazulAzim16

Hiya! Alfred Pennyworth is one of Batman's characters. He does try to help Bruce see things clearly, at crucial moments. It'd be cool to explore that dynamic more but I ...

Subjective, yes, but it's a very good point. I've been thinking about it too, in a way. Still juggling a lot of ideas for #3. I honestly prefer character-driven stories. ...

Points taken and thanks for the review!

Thanks!

I feel terrible*

Thanks for the review! I don't think there will be a part 2. I've done what I wanted to do with this one. You're right. Tajiti isn't really an active ...

I don't know how I missed the notification for some of the reviews here. I LOVE your review! I also get your point about the nine words. Thank you for ...

Thanks for the review! Glad you found it fun to read. I'll have to work on description I think.

it wasn't* :'3

Hi Messy, I wasn't mean. I actually appreciate the thorough and honest approach. I'm starting to notice there's so much that I haven't actually written, so much that's just in ...

Thanks for reading it and for the review! There's no time travel involved. Unless I retcon it :'p. It's just a Gotham City that exists somewhere around London. So Bruce ...

Hiya! 'It would make sense that the last line would echo the hopelessness of the first one, suggesting a sort of endlessness in Jonah's ordeal.' Thanks for the appreciation! '... ...

Thanks, Vervain! It was really informative and helpful. I just stopped amid typing this to have a look the Terry Bisson short. It's hilarious. It's genius. Thanks for the suggestion. ...

Thanks for the review! I agree. In retrospect, I would feel cheated on with what happened if I was the reader. Sure, it's shocking. As plot twists generally are. But ...

Understood. And I agree; this piece does need a lot of polishing. Thanks for the review!