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Hi Mage! The prologue had me hooked right away. It's a cool take on the supernatural. I can't wait to find out more! Like, why/how they summoned Isaac, or what ...

Hi Jacob, Hope you're still there! I think this is one of your finest works. You promised a story about a closet/closets with the title and the beginning part, and ...

Hi Liberty! I have to say, Aud and Will have really come a long way from looking for jobs and running into creepy managers. I feel that the two of ...

Hi Lib! So I've begun to catch up. The reveal at the beginning of the chapter surprised me. It definitely raises the stakes. I love how the stakes are personal ...

Hi Liberty! There was more drama in this chapter. I liked that Will confronted Akol. We got more exposition through the mysterious voice. We were also left with more questions. ...

Hi Liberty! It's been a LONG time since I reviewed chapter 7. I kind of went AWOL for a bit. I see you've writing a lot in the meanwhile. Will ...

Hi Jacob! First of all, the use of letters goes well with this story. We have ourselves an unreliable narrator. Because of the letters, Emily's slow decent into madness becomes ...

Hi Jacob! It was an intriguing story with a vivid setting and some moments that conveyed serious tension. You managed to create interest and hold my attention for the most ...

Hiya Watchamacallit and Lady Gemstone! I've never reviewed an acrostic poem before and I have to say it was really entertaining. I liked the poem itself. If I may, it's ...

Hey there! Credits to you that, by chapter 6, you had us think we got Akol figured out. He came off as dangerous but he's really just a wisecracking guardian ...

Hi Hedwig! Here for another late review. I loved the action in this chapter—first signs of serious trouble. After every chapter I feel like I know Akol a little better. ...

Hi Hedwiggle! This review's coming a little late. I haven't been feeling like reviewing stuff lately for whatever reason. Anyway, let's get right into it. Then realizing they were in ...

Hi! You had me worried about Aud when Will returned and found the place in a mess. I think the devil's previous remark about being careful of "others" lurking around ...

Hi Hedwiggle! Akolxohez steals the show. His mannerism has been set up really well. I think that's an important thing to accomplish with a character early on. Once you've established ...

Hi Lib! This will be a quick review. I'll get right to it. The chapter manages to build on the interest. The reader's on the same page as Will and ...