Megrim

Well in real life you'd have the back of the book/blurb or the query letter, so the reader will know more going into it than we do here. I'm usually ...

Well in real life you'd have the back of the book/blurb or the query letter, so the reader will know more going into it than we do here. I'm usually ...

Thanks for the review! I'll keep those things in mind, especially making the side characters more meaningful.

Thanks for the review! I'm glad to hear your summaries of the characters because that's one of my difficulties with this piece, so the fact that they came across ok ...

Thanks so much! :D

Thanks for the great review and kind words! Some questions for you... What would you consider a "standard" hook opening? What are some other places that you thought were too ...

Wow thanks for the in-depth review! I'll keep those things in mind when I edit this. Lots of good thoughts. And you're right that Taylor is a mechanic heheh, observant ...

Thank you for the review and kind words!

Thank you for your review and I'm glad you enjoyed it! I fixed that silly typo right away.

I ran out of time but will do it soon!

Double post sorry. :S

This essay absolutely broke my heart. It's so sad to see the guilt and confusion that has been drilled into you. I'm so sorry our society has done this to ...

A thousand times like. I was hesitant to say anything so I'm glad someone else put it so wonderfully.

Well any time you think of it, it's a pretty uplifting site!

Don't just watch one. It's kind of randomised so check out a bunch. I believe the origin is LGBT support but it's also meant for anyone who feels bullied, alone, ...