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Re: a rap, based on society
I don’t need to dream the dream cos that’s what im living got my future in my sight , money and lotsa women but whos to say that , this ...
Jul 16, 2009 -
Re: Goodbye my friend
i'm really impressed that you did this on the spot. You were there, when I wanted. but for now, go your own way. there is some negativity to it. it's ...
Jul 16, 2009 -
Re: Another poem!
It was so funny reading your replies.. anyway, the guy was reviewing your work. Expect the negative feedbacks even if you're one of the best writers in the world.. I ...
Jul 15, 2009 -
Re: The Mask
i agree with burgs2009. i'm familiar with this subject too. has been the subject of many poems and great stories. i also agree with rlw92. we can all relate to ...
Jul 13, 2009 -
Re: Love is a Leap
Hi! i posted a poem and you replied to it. (thanks for the review!!) then I just wanted to read some of your works too... i'm not really good also ...
Jul 13, 2009 -
Re: Shiver
i totally get what you're trying to say in your poem. We all end in death. but who's the "he" in the end? all the time you've been using the ...
Jul 13, 2009 -
Re: life and mistakes.........
you do the best you can but it never works. you go somewhere new and you try to fit in but you only get burned. --> too long[i] i have ...
Jul 13, 2009 -
Re: You and Your Eyes
i agree with lordgluzman. you use too many "you". Some parts are cliche... and what you've wrote i've heard of them before. but i think your song is great because ...
Jul 13, 2009
