MeadowLark

Hiya there Kakali! I like the prospect of this story. I'm intrigued by the whole idea and I can't wait to see what you develop it into. However, with that ...

Hiya there! I haven't read any of the previous chapters so this review won't have much to do with the plot. Just a few errors is what I'll be pointing ...

Hi there! This is going to be one of my unhelpful reviews. I just enjoyed reading this too much to actually realize anything wrong with it. I enjoy how you ...

Hi there. Just a note, I haven't read the chapters previous to this so I will not be commenting on the plot. Just minor details I noticed ;) When you ...

I sighed as we arrived at the dark forest green door. The white mansion seemed to loom above us and my mother knocked. A man in uniform answered the door ...

Hiya! I spotted your second chapter so realized I should read the first...and then decided to review it. So, here it goes! I blew on the black scribbles, hoping the ...

Heya there! Just a note, I never read the original, and so there will be no comparisons. Mayhap I'll read it after...This review will most likely just involve pointers on ...

Hiya! Wowza, this was quite different but a intriguing at the same time. Although, I must say, I was confused in some areas. And so, off to the review! She ...

Hiya there. Ah, writer's block. Don't ya hate it? This is an interesting start to an interesting story, if you don't mind me being frank. The first paragraph, however, seems ...

Hi there! I thought this piece was rather cute and it captured the whole childish innocence and the way a child thinks and behaves. I enjoyed the way you described ...

Hiya, Meadow here again. This is an excellent second chapter to your story but I found it lacking in several things. First off, you defiantly need to (like the person ...

Hi there! I haven't reviewed in a long while, so here it goes! “Dark shadows swept the lands as the last ray of light disappeared behind the mountains. No longer ...

Saph...or Mira...or...Saphmira! As discussed previously in other discussions and in this case, another website compeltely, I am here by your request to review this piece of...literature. Hmm...With my

Hi there! I'm Meadow, and it's been a long time since i reviewed anything so sorry if I'm not helpful Dawn was one of Igy’s favorite times of day. Her ...

Heya there! Old magics and old spirits awaken and step out upon the world they have not seen for a year. Old sounds a little repetitive here and I would ...