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Oh, good, I'm glad it was helpful! I can't think of anything else right now, but if I do, I'll let you know.

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it so much.

Thanks for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed it so much!

Thank you for the review! I'm glad you liked it.

No problem! A scene break is just when the scene changes. Think in a movie, when it fades to black for a second, then when it comes back we're in ...

Well, yeah, it's just that typically there would be a scene break (couple of double-spaced lines) to show the transistion. It makes it easier for readers to see that you're ...

For expositing the glyph effect, you could frame it more in Hilda's head, so it feels more like she's the one saying/thinkin it - basically add in her opinion. You ...

xD

You forgot to tag me again. ;-;

No problem! :)

Lol it's only 5 months old (wow already, time flies). But it's apparently it's made its way to the Spotlight again too so don't feel too bad. xD

Thank you! It's nice to see this out of the Green Room.