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More modern air conditioners basically look like a small metal vent in the floor or the ceiling of each room. The pipes run through the house in the walls from ...

Ah, awesome! All that stuff makes a lot more sense. And it's totally okay that you haven't been replying. :P And yes! Do please tag me when more chapters come ...

Fair enough. :P

"Wide-eyed and bushy-tailed" is a phrase used to mean new and inexperienced. :P Thanks for the review, it was very helpful!

Thanks for the review! She was never in her bedroom, always in the kitchen. Her mom didn't knock, Sandra just heard her moving around and knew she was going to ...

Go to bed, then! xD Don't stay up on my account.

Ooh, the map is great, thanks! :D

Honestly, I think you could totally do that, as long as you still describe them in the text. Lots of published novels have pictures of the cool creatures in them, ...

I'm early because I did it in the morning instead of the evening. :P That's cool! I look forward to seeing more of the Sea Talon culture. Also, I wish ...

I'm honestly just really glad you appreciate them - it just makes me want to review even more. :D And it's always more fun following a novel then just randomly ...

Sure! It's not that I don't like him, it's more that he doesn't have a really unique entertaining voice (which is fine, most characters don't), and more importantly that he ...

Also, if you post any new parts, let me know and I'll review them. I don't think I'm going to review your sixth part for now, since it's out of ...

Haha, it's okay. :D

Actually more Divergent, but Hunger Games was a big inspiration too. :P