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Re: Quest for Fire ~ Chapter 20 ~ The Journey
Awesome! Looks like you're way ahead of me. xD I'll be sure to go back and read that.
Sat Feb 18, 2017 1:39 am -
Re: Hidden Entity - 2.4 - Red Gas
More modern air conditioners basically look like a small metal vent in the floor or the ceiling of each room. The pipes run through the house in the walls from ...
Thu Feb 16, 2017 10:23 pm -
Re: Quest for Fire ~ Chapter 18 ~ The Maze
Ah, awesome! All that stuff makes a lot more sense. And it's totally okay that you haven't been replying. :P And yes! Do please tag me when more chapters come ...
Wed Feb 15, 2017 6:39 am -
Re: The Ghost Bus: Chapter 1
Fair enough. :P
Mon Feb 13, 2017 3:03 am -
Re: The Ghost Bus: Chapter 1
"Wide-eyed and bushy-tailed" is a phrase used to mean new and inexperienced. :P Thanks for the review, it was very helpful!
Sun Feb 12, 2017 8:15 pm -
Re: The Ghost Bus: Chapter 1
Thanks for the review! She was never in her bedroom, always in the kitchen. Her mom didn't knock, Sandra just heard her moving around and knew she was going to ...
Sun Feb 12, 2017 8:14 pm -
Re: Quest for Fire ~ Chapter 13 ~ The Idea
Go to bed, then! xD Don't stay up on my account.
Sat Feb 11, 2017 1:46 pm -
Re: Quest for Fire ~ Chapter 11 ~ The Dream
Ooh, the map is great, thanks! :D
Thu Feb 09, 2017 12:15 am -
Re: Quest for Fire ~ Chapter 8 ~ Felistia and Shiraku
Honestly, I think you could totally do that, as long as you still describe them in the text. Lots of published novels have pictures of the cool creatures in them, ...
Mon Feb 06, 2017 4:57 am -
Re: Quest for Fire ~ Chapter 8 ~ Felistia and Shiraku
I'm early because I did it in the morning instead of the evening. :P That's cool! I look forward to seeing more of the Sea Talon culture. Also, I wish ...
Mon Feb 06, 2017 4:42 am -
Re: Quest for Fire ~ Chapter 7 ~ Into the Mist
I'm honestly just really glad you appreciate them - it just makes me want to review even more. :D And it's always more fun following a novel then just randomly ...
Sun Feb 05, 2017 10:22 am -
Re: Quest for Fire ~ Chapter 4 ~ Pin Head
Sure! It's not that I don't like him, it's more that he doesn't have a really unique entertaining voice (which is fine, most characters don't), and more importantly that he ...
Thu Feb 02, 2017 11:58 am -
Re: Daegar - Chapter Five of Shattered Crowns
Also, if you post any new parts, let me know and I'll review them. I don't think I'm going to review your sixth part for now, since it's out of ...
Sun Jan 29, 2017 7:42 am -
Re: Stop the Rewind: Chapter 4
Haha, it's okay. :D
Sat Jan 21, 2017 10:19 pm - Re: Prince, Spy, Priest Mon Jan 16, 2017 3:46 am
