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No problem! I'm really glad it was helpful, because yeah, fight scenes are a beast and it always takes a while to figure them out. :D

Hey, I just wanted to drop by and say I really really like this! Your last six lines are killer - they absolutely made the piece for me. The image ...

I should've guessed you'd have already done the math on the dosages! :P Thanks for the info - that was cool to read! And yeah, having Lennard bring it up ...

Ah, that makes more sense and fits better! I think I got confused because you were comparing it to Gael and Haka, when I really should have remembered that Ilami ...

Ah, glad to know I'm the first one to notice that! And it makes sense about them being more masculine in non-romantic settings - heck, I noticed a bit of ...

Sure, I'll review it either today or tomorrow. Gotta start getting them when they're in the Green Room. :P

Yay, I'm glad you like the opening too! Re: the prologue making Madeline feel too much like the main character - yeah, it's what make me hesitant about including it. ...

Aaaah thank you! I'm glad you love the opening paragraph because it was one of the risky things I did but I love it because of what you said - ...

Haha I had the same problem with Mixing Magic the first and second draft. xD But yeah, I've really liked reading this all through this way - maybe something I ...

Yeah, all of that makes a lot of sense! Honestly, I'd been reading Edna as HOH as well, just by default because she's old and because of some of the ...

What can I say except this was amazing? There's so much packed into this one little story and I just wish it was a whole book.

Thank you thank you! :D This is so lovely and it really helps me know what to tidy up. I agree that I had a lot packed into the poem ...

Which had really made it a shock when Kiernan told him that the Council of Wizards were convening to name a Chosen One destined to destroy him. “What have I ...

Thanks for the lovely review! I've submitted my poetry to a couple contests but never gotten anything published. Maybe this'll be the one. :P I really take your points about ...

Thanks for the review! I think your dislike of the last stanza comes from having taken a rather different interpretation of the poem then what I had in mind when ...