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Okay, back to review the second part of this like you asked. I think you should consider giving the main character a name. I know that this is such a ...

Hey Traves! Sounds like I'm reading the second draft of this story by now, so cool, glad I can still be of some help. I think the concept here works. ...

Hey Pan! I'm back to (hopefully) finish catching up with these! Ah, it was so good to hear Dante's voice again. :D I agree with Blue that I'm not sure ...

Okay, I think this will probably have to be my last review for the day, which is a shame because I'm still not caught up, but here we go. :) ...

Okay well this chapter was a roller coaster from start to finish and I love it. First off, PARIS. Don't give a 12-year-old wine, honestly . “You haven’t explain- you’ve ...

Hey Pan! Back as usual, and we'll see how many of these I can catch up with before Review Day ends. :) The deck of cards detail is really interesting ...

Hey there! I'm back as usual for a review on this. :D I think you could make this chapter a little more concise. Although we definitely make progress in this ...

Hey Light! I'm back as usual, and somewhat on time this time! This will be a bit of a shorter review, but let's dive into it. A few things: 1. ...

I'm back! Okay, the incident with Daisy and the pond is honestly almost disturbing. Daisy definitely feels even more malicious right now, and I just straight-up do not like her ...

OH EXCELLENT this is still in the Green Room, I was gonna feel bad about doing a non-Green Room review on Review Day. Also HOW am I so behind on ...

All right, it took longer than I wanted, but I am finally here for this review! This is an interesting poem. I'm not always quite sure what to make of ...

Hey Light! I'm finally here for a review. :D I know it's been a while, but I definitely haven't abandoned this story. I'm not quite sure what to say about ...

I love this chapter. I don't even know what to say about it except that I love it. Have I mentioned I wish this was a published book already? Finding ...

Hey there! I'm back to review this as usual, and I'm sorry to have kept you waiting so long. Life is crazy, and all that. :) This chapter didn't have ...

Hey there bigsis! Thanks for requesting a review in my thread! I'm here for that review now, so let's dive right into this. Let's talk about the very beginning of ...