Maybeileen

Thank you so much for the in-depth review. I see you're point with everything (sorry about the switch in tenses- I didn't review this as much as I should have.) ...

Thanks so much for the review. I'm really glad that you liked it! :)

I never thought of it that way! I will definitely read it again with that in mind! :) Thanks.

Thanks so much! I will be sure to fix some mistakes and I am posting the next chapter in a few minutes. I hope you will keep reading and thanks ...

Thank you so much for reading! I know the length makes less people want to read it but I very much appreciate you saying you'd continue to! :) If there's ...

Woa! I am totally blown away by your originality. This isn't much of a review, more of a comment that you're way with words is amazing! I'm definitely a fan ...

I will make sure to check out some of your work! Thanks again for the review!

Thanks for commenting! The more feedback the better! :) I'm so glad that you enjoyed it.

I'm so glad you were inspired by this, that alone makes sharing it worth it. Thanks for commenting! :)

I'm not sure this reply went through the first time. Thanks a ton for reading and reviewing! Bella from Twilight?? Ouch! XD But at the same time I can see ...

Thank you so much for the review! I can appreciate anyone who takes the time to form an opinion about my writing. :)

Sorry, I am a terrible speller so it won't be the last time. XD I am so glad you relate to what I've said! I was apprehensive about posting it ...

Hi haywireimagination, I'm so glad you enjoyed it and thank you so much for reviewing. As far as dreaming not living; I was referring to waiting for your dream to ...

Thank you so much for the review! As you can tell I'm not too good at grammar but that should improve after being on this site! :)

Thank you so much for the constructive criticism! Not only that, but now I see how to write a proper review! Thanks! :)