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So death can kill things, as well as guide them once their dead? But cannot stop things from dying? Why can't he if he's the one who makes them dead?

Thank! I used Adonis as the character he talks to simply because there is a period of time in which adonis lives in Hades in the myths. I needed someone, ...

Thanks! I think your right, I will be sure to add something that explains the myth of Sisyphus, and yes, you are right, the tense is a little confused. I ...

Sounds like a cool idea! For inspiration I suggest reading/watching Man In The High Castle, similar concept, and super good.

Thanks for the review! I will definitely try to make it less exposition like. The reason it may feel that way and the reason it ends so abruptly is because ...

Thanks for reading it! I will make those minor edits, and I agree, the line between meaningful and unrealistic dialogue is blurry. I will try to find a way to ...

Oh, and by the way, you left the same review twice (:

Thanks for the review! I also really like Nora, writing for her is really enjoyable. I think Kurt is the best person out of the main three and kinda who ...

I really like it. Very easy to read, and the rhythm is perfect. It's funny how it describes depression really effectively through the fun style. In some ways, it's better ...

Thanks for the review! I will be sure to correct this grammatical errors. It may feel a bit like nothing right now, it%u2019s just the first page of a longer ...

Thanks! Yeah, Kurt is who I want to be, but in reality I am Nora and Clark.