MaybeAndrew

Thanks for the review! I defiantly am telling a lot in this page rather than showing, that's something I need to edit. Also, on the part about the four-year-old; I ...

Wow, I%u2019ve never gotten my review reviewed before. Glad I helped!

Thanks for clearing up that confusion! If I were you, I might put explanations like that in the text, because I'm sure not everyone would know what kanji are. And ...

Thanks, it is.

Thanks for the review! I will be sure to change those.

Thanks for the review! I will be sure to change those.

I liked this. It was the good part of nostalgia, and that roof story is very pure. I am still a teenager, so I don't know if I have a ...

Cool

Cool

Thank you so much! I have edited all of those now. I both over and under use commas, haha. But, I messed up like the most pivotal line about her ...

Thanks for pointing those out! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and your review definently helped!

Thank you so much! I had a lot of fun writing this, I'm glad you liked it, and yes, "but some that you were hungry" was a miss-edit, I didn't ...

Thanks for the review! I decided to write from the point of view of a ring because I was thinking about stories written in the first person where the narrater ...

I have never written a romance! I threw this together on a whim a day or two ago. Hope y’all like it!

Your welcome, good luck!