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Hey Icy, thanks so much for the review! I'm glad you like the pictures, I do to (: All of those critiques are really helpful, and I will be working ...

Thank you so much for the review! I have no idea how it slipped by. It is genuinely so kind, and OHMYGOSH its been a bit since I've reviewed your ...

Thank you so much for the review Icy! I agree that maybe one of the three conversations could be cut, looking into that at the moment.

Thank you so much for your review! I agree that maybe the order of the scenes could be messed with. Trying to figure that out right now!

Thank you so much for the review Icy! rewriting this chapter rn, so you're reviews have been very helpful!

Thanks again for the review I think my only question about the Old Tongue at this point would be how Keepers/ any particular Keeper hasnn%u2019t taken over the world or ...

Thank you so much for the review Lim! Yes, the boat is partly kinda magic, but also, you'd be surprised by how fast sailboats can go, especially a small one, ...

Thank you so much for the review! Comparing the Old Tongue to the coding language of the world is a good comparison. Essaintly what I'm trying to say is that ...

Thank you so much for the review, Lim! You thinking the Old Tongue felt magical genuinely had me smiling from ear to ear! The switch between him being willing to ...

Thanks so much for the review! I'm glad you like the Old Tongue (: the entire story sprung out of it. I'm also really glad you picked up on linking ...

Thank you so much for your review! All those thoughts are suuuper helpful. Infinite stamina bar XD. That actually becomes pretty relevant later in the story, but that phrase made ...

Thank you so much for the review horisun! I'm glad the "old stuff" isn't getting overdone... because I love writing it. I think you're right though, books of Secrets might ...

Thank you sooo much for the thouhts lim! I'm glad the prologue makes the curious about the rest of the story!

Thank you so much for your thoughts! I agree that this chapter is a bit hard to follow, I'll try to fix that!

Thank you so much for you're review Reaper! Glad you like the questions!