MaybeAndrew

Thank you so much for the review Alex! I really enjoyed your commentary and style. The Green Knight aspect of this story is inspired by the medieval poem, Sir Gawain ...

Thanks so much for the review! I'm glad you liked the tone. Thank you for the extensiveness of your review, it means a lot. On the lack of personality in ...

Thanks so much for the review!

Thank you for reading this monster of a chapter... it is sooo long! Your feedback will be super helpful when I edit it all!

Thanks for the review! I will take all of that into account in the edit!

Thaaank you so much for the review!

If we haven't covered it already, it would be good to know how far out we are for another one to be sent off? Has it just happened, or are ...

I'm interested that Liam's position doesn't extend to just giving some people his list and having them fetch and deliver the supplies for him. Like he can request assistance, but ...

Thanks for the review! Ahab will come up again as a more literal plot element, but he will always be used as a metaphor to respent how trapped Liam feels.

Hey icy, thanks for the review Regarding the dagger, it kind of feels like an attitude I would have expected him to have before accepting the apprentice position. Perhaps because ...

Thank you so much for the review icy! The feedback is super helpful!

Thank you so much for the review! I think you're right about the dialogue between Rebecka and Liam. I'll be sure to edit that!

Thank you so much for the review! I'll be sure to put in a description of Liam somewhere soon!

Thank you so much for the the review Mercedes! Your thoughts are really helpful! You're right about that function problem there, and I'll look into the situation with 'dad' and ...

I certainly hope it will be less gloomy. Any food I have to try while I'm there? Any suggestions of how to prepare?