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Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 4.2
OOOOOOOH I WAS RIGHT CRAPS HITTING THE FAAAAAN Ahem, sorry, Andrew here with a review. Now, you may get a billion reviews out of me today for a variety of ...
Sep 25, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 4.1
Andrew here with a review! Oooooh we get to see this from daisies point of view now, this is exciting. And maybe I'm wrong, but I can sense a rising ...
Sep 25, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 3.6
Andrew here for a review! Overall, this chapter gives us a bit of info, and is relatively well built. Honestly, sometimes these chapter chunks are so short I don't have ...
Sep 25, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 3.5
Andrew here with a quick review! This chapter is a nice little chill bit after the tension of before. Not a ton happens, besides a trip, we’ve already seen, so ...
Sep 16, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 3.4
Ooooooh forest, trees. Andrew here with a review. This chapter was a good extension of the last one, if a bit anticlimatic (all they got to see was trees? ): ...
Sep 14, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 3.2
WE"RE GUNNA GET TO SEE THE ALEINS WOOOO Ahem I mean, hey, Andrew here with a review! Liked this chapter, and all the jokes riving at current technology. I'm intensely ...
Sep 14, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 3.1
Okay, Andrew here with a review! Before we get into the chapter, I'm going to do a bit of an overall review of the story up to this point, since ...
Sep 9, 2021 -
Re: The Evacuation (Part 1)
Andrew here with a review! First off, a story about an event so recent is umm... bold, I'd say. Alternate history is always interesting though. Overall, the grammar and the ...
Sep 9, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 2.5
Andrew here with a review! Oooooh, so much lore... Overall, I liked this chapter, it gives us a lot more ideas to play with, and makes our child characters seem ...
Sep 9, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 2.4
Andrew here with a review! Oh my gosh, this is getting exciting, I think I'll probably review two chapters tonight so I can see what happens next, so many questions ...
Sep 7, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 2.3
Andrew here with a review! A chapter with some actual danger and tension, so that's fun. Aria is likable, Harry is immature but charming for it, and I'm glad to ...
Sep 6, 2021 -
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Okay! Andrew here for a review, you're piece was very well written and had very few grammatical mistakes that I could find. Because of this and the fact that most ...
Sep 5, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 2.1
Okay, andrew here, noooow understanding context! This chapter piece confirms the fact this story will be about escaping, gives us some hope, and a place for the plot to go. ...
Sep 5, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 2.2
Helloooooo Andrew here with a real fast review. First off, chapter 2.1 seems to have entirely disappeared, so the context for this is gooone, buuuuuut, here I go anyway! OH ...
Sep 4, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 1.5
Hey, Andrew here with a review! Overall this is a good little piece, if short, brings along the romance a bit, gives us some info. Honestly, I am currently most ...
Sep 2, 2021
