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Re: The Holy Spring - Part 2
Andrew here to review your piece! This was a good follow-up on the second one and had that great and terrible feeling of getting to watch our main character be ...
Sep 2, 2021 -
Re: The Holy Spring - Part 1
Hey, Andrew here with your review! This story was well written, the paragraph and sentence structure was admirable, and the story itself is intriguing. The people having different plant material ...
Sep 1, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 1.4
Hey, Andrew here with a review! This section was a good extension of the last one, and gives us some new info and new questions. This story has done a ...
Sep 1, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 1.3
Hey! It's Andrew back with a review! This chapter was fun, and making me prep for a good ol' fashion prison break! Let's go Great Escape style! I'd say the ...
Aug 31, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 1.2
Andrew here with a review! So, this chapter caught my interest. It was intriguing, and I now need to keep reading to see what's going on, and what you'll do ...
Aug 31, 2021 -
Re: They told me
I really liked this! Maybe my favourite genre of the poem is that children whimsy (maybe because it's the only stuff I understand. This is my favourite bit: [qoute] Then ...
Aug 16, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 1.1
Andrew is here to do some reviewing! Yes! I'm back in the reviewing game. I hope to be able to review all the chapters of this new story, but we ...
Aug 16, 2021 -
Re: Honey and Steel
Andrew here for my first review in a long time! I'm a bit outa practice, so I hope i can still be of some use (; Overall, I enjoyed it, ...
Aug 13, 2021 -
Re: ode to a bagel crumb stuck in my thoat
hey momo, just wanted to leave a real quick review. This reminds me of Shel Silverstein - which is to say it's some of the only poetry I understand and ...
May 24, 2021 -
Re: Avery Phoenix - Prologue
Hey! Andrew here for my first review in months! I'm a little angry I'm not the first review, but it proves my point that this website's very responsive with reviews. ...
Mar 23, 2021 -
Re: We Have To Stop Meeting Like This (When We Ruled The Waves Chapter 2)
Okay, Andrew here for a review! I'm a little rusty at these, so don't judge! Also, I only had time to skim the first chapter so forgive any confusion I ...
Jan 31, 2021 -
Re: Dear Anne
Hey, Andrew here for a review! This is a fun and interesting format, and the twist that she’s writing letters to no one is cool. As far as critiques go, ...
Dec 27, 2020 -
Re: Ayna - The Mirror (Chapter 01)
I'm here for your harsh review! Sorry for the delay, I have been busy lately, but I am finally here. I won't be discussing individual lines, the story is quite ...
Nov 4, 2020 -
Re: The Rage (Chapter 7)
I am sooooo sorry how long it took me to get you your harsh review! Been super busy lately! But here it is! Okay, so, I have not read the ...
Oct 29, 2020 -
Re: Chapter 4: Sea You Tonight
Okay, a short one, because this specific chapter doesn't have a ton of things in need of harshness (and I've already voiced most of my opinion about the overall story ...
Oct 12, 2020
