MatthewBorrelli

I like how you had made the story make sense by showing that the characters feelings and what they did I wonder if you could fix a few grammar mistakes ...

I like how you had made the story make sense by showing that the characters feelings and what they did I wonder if you could fix a few grammar mistakes ...

I like how the story is diferent from many being the main characters are thieves but at the same time good people. I also like how the story can be ...

I like how your story explains how a very greedy man can turn into a very kind man with the help of others. I also like how included many things ...

I like how the story was made it was very beautifuly made. I wonder if spelling corrections could be made