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Re: As if I Never Existed
I'm lovin' the effort, Morgan. haha xD
Mar 3, 2011 -
Re: When Nothing Else Matters
Thank you for your opinion! However, if you read the poem out loud, you will notice the subtlety of the rhyming. I prefer to rhyme the middle of words, such ...
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Re: As if I Never Existed
Thanks! I was trying to rhyme the "ar" noise inside the words, but I guess it didn't have that effect.
Mar 3, 2011 -
Re: deleted
This is wonderfully true about any given journal. I applaud your creative rhyming. However, the conclusion throws the whole poem out of proportion, and it sounds slightly off. I recommend ...
Mar 3, 2011