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Master_Yoda

  • Short Story » General, General Re: Into Africa (working title)

    Hi Blue So, I wanted to talk a bit about your piece here. See, I think it has solid potential, but to put it bluntly I found that it seemed ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: To Kill A Unicorn [1/2]

    Yo Hawk, I hate reviewing stuff like this. I feel like I'm stifling creative freedom whenever I have an constructive criticism. Nevertheless, I am here and here to stay, so ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Imo: Split Personality Chp 1

    Hey Dudette This is going to be a rather short review. Mostly because I don't have much to say. Since my last read, this has become really awesome. :) You ...

    Mar 21, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: .

    Hi Rosey, Before I give you my usual, I just wanted to remark on your astounding grasp of your character and how you've so successfully got into her head. It's ...

    Mar 21, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Opal' (Prologue)

    Hi Mikko You have a great ability to describe and a neat prose to run along with it. With these strengths you have the power and ability to gross out ...

    Feb 27, 2011
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Just Another Family Torn

    Hi there, I decided to give this thingy a bit of a review... I really like your prose. You've got an interesting way with words and it's lively and fresh. ...

    Feb 27, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Bread

    Hi Lupis Did you ever see Lions for Lambs starring Meryl Streep and Tom Cruise? Well, your story reminded me of that. A bout of awesome acting. A few disconnected ...

    Feb 27, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Old

    Hey Skins, I decided I might as well kill some time writing you a review. I'm going to focus this on the two most recent Charlie chapters. The ones I ...

    Feb 27, 2011
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Books??? I need some....

    Brisngr (I might have spelt that wrong). No you spelled it right Christopher Paolini spelled it wrong. ;) I would recommend The Bartimaeus Trilogy by Jonathan Stroud. Also Sabriel by ...

    Jan 31, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: On The Road (Chapter 3)

    Hi Dylan :) I'm here to review your story at last. This is going to be an interesting piece for me to review. I can tell that much already. Your ...

    Jan 21, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: A Questionable Drink (Rated 12+)

    Oh, erm. Hi there. I'll be with you in a second. Okay, sorry about that. I'm with you now. Firstly, welcome to the green club. Secondly, I'm sorry, I'm late. ...

    Jan 20, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Stop and Stare (Part 4)

    Hey Skins, I apologize for the delay once again, but I guess I'm getting quite good at delaying. This time, my excuse is that I was not feeling particularly well ...

    Jan 18, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Magi {ch.5}

    Hi there Pointe, I apologize for taking my time, but I guess I've been busy. Still, better late than never, right? Here's your requested review. Oh, and thanks for the ...

    Jan 11, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Removed

    Hi Rosey, Yay, it's been a while since I had one of your pieces to review. Thanks for the request. :) I'm going to break my review down into steps ...

    Jan 5, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Insomnia

    Hey Bro, You have a story with great potential here. It has the potential for terrifying horror that might shake even Chuck Norris's boots. Well not Chuck Norris, but almost ...

    Dec 28, 2010


Poetry is like a bird, it ignores all frontiers.
— Yevgeny Yevtushenko