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Re: Into Africa (working title)
Hi Blue So, I wanted to talk a bit about your piece here. See, I think it has solid potential, but to put it bluntly I found that it seemed ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: To Kill A Unicorn [1/2]
Yo Hawk, I hate reviewing stuff like this. I feel like I'm stifling creative freedom whenever I have an constructive criticism. Nevertheless, I am here and here to stay, so ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Imo: Split Personality Chp 1
Hey Dudette This is going to be a rather short review. Mostly because I don't have much to say. Since my last read, this has become really awesome. :) You ...
Mar 21, 2011 -
Re: .
Hi Rosey, Before I give you my usual, I just wanted to remark on your astounding grasp of your character and how you've so successfully got into her head. It's ...
Mar 21, 2011 -
Re: Opal' (Prologue)
Hi Mikko You have a great ability to describe and a neat prose to run along with it. With these strengths you have the power and ability to gross out ...
Feb 27, 2011 -
Re: Just Another Family Torn
Hi there, I decided to give this thingy a bit of a review... I really like your prose. You've got an interesting way with words and it's lively and fresh. ...
Feb 27, 2011 -
Re: Bread
Hi Lupis Did you ever see Lions for Lambs starring Meryl Streep and Tom Cruise? Well, your story reminded me of that. A bout of awesome acting. A few disconnected ...
Feb 27, 2011 -
Re: Old
Hey Skins, I decided I might as well kill some time writing you a review. I'm going to focus this on the two most recent Charlie chapters. The ones I ...
Feb 27, 2011 -
Re: Books??? I need some....
Brisngr (I might have spelt that wrong). No you spelled it right Christopher Paolini spelled it wrong. ;) I would recommend The Bartimaeus Trilogy by Jonathan Stroud. Also Sabriel by ...
Jan 31, 2011 -
Re: On The Road (Chapter 3)
Hi Dylan :) I'm here to review your story at last. This is going to be an interesting piece for me to review. I can tell that much already. Your ...
Jan 21, 2011 -
Re: A Questionable Drink (Rated 12+)
Oh, erm. Hi there. I'll be with you in a second. Okay, sorry about that. I'm with you now. Firstly, welcome to the green club. Secondly, I'm sorry, I'm late. ...
Jan 20, 2011 -
Re: Stop and Stare (Part 4)
Hey Skins, I apologize for the delay once again, but I guess I'm getting quite good at delaying. This time, my excuse is that I was not feeling particularly well ...
Jan 18, 2011 -
Re: The Magi {ch.5}
Hi there Pointe, I apologize for taking my time, but I guess I've been busy. Still, better late than never, right? Here's your requested review. Oh, and thanks for the ...
Jan 11, 2011 -
Re: Removed
Hi Rosey, Yay, it's been a while since I had one of your pieces to review. Thanks for the request. :) I'm going to break my review down into steps ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: Insomnia
Hey Bro, You have a story with great potential here. It has the potential for terrifying horror that might shake even Chuck Norris's boots. Well not Chuck Norris, but almost ...
Dec 28, 2010
