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MarySue

Gray Lace

This is for a series I want to start, I really like the idea, but I would like some feedback.
  • Gray Lace ~ Prologue
    • Novel / Chapter
    • Dramatic · Teen Fiction
    1 min read
  • Gray Lace~ Chapter 1

    This is the first "chapter" I suppose, though it is awfully short.

    • Novel / Chapter
    • Dramatic · Teen Fiction
    2 min read


Your hesitation suggests you are trying to protect my feelings. However, since I have none, I would prefer you to be honest. An artist's growth depends upon accurate feedback.
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