MaryEvans

Valid points. And believe me I reread it. One too many times. It's mostly why those silly mistakes get in. When I murder the old sentences and replace them with ...

Then use the Captain, with a "the" to mark a status. Not just Captain, which sounds like a name or nickname. It's as simple and easy as that. Anyhow, keep ...

Again, gender doesn't matter to the story, so I didn't specify it. Also warrior doesn't really equal a guy, though I suppose those are the stereotypes. And the croud are ...

I didn%u2019t specify a gender or sex because they don%u2019t really matter. It%u2019s funny how people always get hung up over that. I guess it might be just me, writing ...

Thank you for reading and reviewing. As I said earlier spacing is beyong me, regardless of what I try to do, the editor simply resets it to an earlier version ...

First I want to thank you for taking your time to read and comment, I find your remarks really helpful and I will look over the stylistic issues. And yes ...

Thank you for the time and effort you took to look this over and point out in detail what you found wrong. I really appreciate it. My punctuation is horrid, ...

Thanks for the review. I will look though my writing to see if it really is that unclear when she returns home. I blame it on the format really, in ...