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Re: Cancer
I think you captured the true state of cancer in a beautiful, dark way. It is a horrible, relentless, unforgiving disease. I'm truly sorry for whatever provoked you to write ...
Nov 15, 2013 -
Re: Kira: Chpt. 2 (Revised)
Hello! I really enjoyed your piece; I hope you continue this story. It's very interesting, and captured my attention from the beginning. Your word choice is phenomenal. It makes this ...
Nov 14, 2013 -
Re: Misfits - Chapter 2
Again, very good work. I really like the amount of internal conflict in this piece. It helps the reader get into Todd's mind, and to think like him. Like I ...
Nov 14, 2013 -
Re: Misfits
I like this story a lot. It's incredibly realistic, and very deep. I like how you take on very real issues, like domestic violence. It adds to the realism of ...
Nov 14, 2013
