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Mary97

  • Poetry » Realistic, Health Re: Cancer

    I think you captured the true state of cancer in a beautiful, dark way. It is a horrible, relentless, unforgiving disease. I'm truly sorry for whatever provoked you to write ...

    Nov 15, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Kira: Chpt. 2 (Revised)

    Hello! I really enjoyed your piece; I hope you continue this story. It's very interesting, and captured my attention from the beginning. Your word choice is phenomenal. It makes this ...

    Nov 14, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Misfits - Chapter 2

    Again, very good work. I really like the amount of internal conflict in this piece. It helps the reader get into Todd's mind, and to think like him. Like I ...

    Nov 14, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Misfits

    I like this story a lot. It's incredibly realistic, and very deep. I like how you take on very real issues, like domestic violence. It adds to the realism of ...

    Nov 14, 2013


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