MartinLuther1483

Thank you for that. That motivates me to continue, thank you.

Thank you. :)

Thank you for pointing out errors, it was a just a practice poem I wanted to see what people would think of my work and I appreciate your honesty. Thank ...

Lol. Yeah it's a vignette, I tried making it connect, it wasn't meant to be a vignette, I wanted to stop as soon as possible, I couldn't connect with it.

Thanks, I'll try and extend it next time.

Thank you. :)

I tried.

This was really interesting, I couldn't get a grasp on somethings but others were really good. Very unique. Scale from One to Ten: Eight

Wow, that is an awesome piece. Five start rating. I watch Bleach and this is like Ichigo's beginning in a short poem. Really good.