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Mars

  • Pop

    Author's note: I don't know if I should continue this, or just leave it as it is. Anyway, comment on what you think, and please give me feedback, I need ...

    5 min read
  • Wings

    A Softer World contest #3 Wings When I was in high school, I knew a girl named Linda. She had sparkling brown eyes and yellow hair. Not filled with highlights, ...

    3 min read
  • Don't Fret

    I guess everyone has their own “one that got away.” He was mine and he always would be. Stupid trivial high school flames, with their stupid attractions and attachments and ...

    4 min read
  • Deleted

    ...gone! For submission.

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  • Deleted

    ...gone! For submission.

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  • Unhappily Ever After

    Unhappily Ever After In the farthest nook of the Buckingham Palace, in the kitchen pantry where no one goes save for the cook-who fortunately works in tunnel vision-a woman and ...

    3 min read
  • Be Not Afraid

    Be Not Afraid I meet him at the battle field on a snowy day. "Are you sure you want to challenge me?" Lawrence Raeburn smirks, removing his mittens. He shifts ...

    5 min read
  • The Mitten

    The Mitten Characters: KITTEN, the tiniest kitten BUNNY and MOUSE, Kitten's BFFs FOX, a confused and in love fox ROX, Fox’s girlfriend ACT ONEAll is quiet in Ubergaladalaba.Enter MOUSE and ...

    5 min read
  • Talking of Michelangelo

    Talking of Michelangelo word 22; down The hall was decorated like a successful upscale whorehouse. Its ivory walls were spotted with banal paintings of faces and wildflowers, velvet streamers hung ...

    3 min read
  • Deleted.

    Thanks Angel; I really appreciate the work you put into your review, and I'll use it, but I've decided to work on this part and the rest for awhile, and ...

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  • Ghosts

    For a creative writing contest at my school, deadline May 4, maximum 1500 words, so reviews are very much needed/appreciated. Especially tell me if it's too confusing, because I'm worried ...

    9 min read
  • Left Hand Empty

    I need somewhere to go for the night, that’s certain. For a moment, my adventurous side considers driving down one of the winding, unpaved roads to Perth, but logic smashes ...

    3 min read
  • Like Broken Glass

    When I stare at something long enough without blinking my eyes get blurry and everything's out of focus. It is happening now. Still, I keep them open, counting the seconds ...

    5 min read
  • Wild Red Leaves

    They reached the forest just in time to see te sky turn crimson behind the elm trees. The loose pebbles covering the dirt road bounced up against the car, scratching ...

    4 min read
  • Sheila

    You a cop? Lemme see your badge. So you gunna arrest me? What d'you mean, not if I talk to you? Ain't nobody want to just talk. I'm not going ...

    3 min read
  • How It Ends

    They come back every autumn: pretty high school girls, walking stiffly through the halls in new jeans and skirts and blouses. They always try too hard during the first few ...

    6 min read
  • Love and Music

    deleted for entry into a contest

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