MariaRowlands

That was very, very, VERY good! I believe that you have potential to become a short story author.

O_O'! That was better than the last chapter!

O_O'! KEI! THAT WAS AWSOME! how many Naruto episodes have you seen? I have seen all of them.

O_O' WOW is all that I can say.

How do you do that with stories?! You are extremly good at writing stories such as this one!

That is brilliant! I belive that you have alot of potential for writing. I love the part where the flaming wolf appears to save the girl from the reapers.

That is a brilliant story and I hope that you go far with talent such as that. I may be in my teens but I know when others have a ...

THat is soooo sad! You are a brilliant writer but the part of the child's escape is sort of confusing and you may need to try and make it more ...

It's sorta ok but you need to make it rhyme more ore else it won't make sense.

THat is becaus eit is meant to be confusing and it implies the imression of being lost.

OMG! That is bloody brilliant! Please write more on this story! I think you have a gift in writing!

Oh and thumbs up for a job well done!

That was bloody brilliant! It completly captures the image of someone that is lost in love with the wrong person but can't see that for themself! I belive that you ...

Is this all true? It felt as though it was real! WRITE MORE! Please.

That was rather interesting but it needs more action and adventure. It is ok but rather confusing as well.